The Cartel

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The Cartel

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The Story: Everyone knows the famous Pablo Escobar. He was the richest criminal in the whole world, he had 9Billion U.S Dollars. Escobar was born in Colombia where from he estimated a drug cartel of incredible proportion. On top of his career he even tried to become the president of Colombia, raged a court with tanks and build his own personal jail. In 1993 he was shot by American special force. After he got shot, someone should have taken his billions. And someone did take them. It was his son, Lorenzo Escobar. He took all the billions, changed his last name and moved to Los Santos, Because his father knew something inportant there.

He was now Lorenzo Makar, he had lots of money, but he didin't have the right connections. Lorenzo bought an apartament, and started thinking how to continue his fathers work here in Los Santos... ... One week passed... Still no ideas... He decided to go for a walk. As soon as he left his house, he saw a tramp sitting near the entrence.
The tramp: Any spare change, sir?
Lorenzo: Yea, sure
* And threw him a $100 bill *
The tramp: Thank you, Lorenzo
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* Lorenzo was walking away and suddenly stopped when he heard these words *
Lorenzo:Waiiit.... Whaaat? How did you know my name?
* When Lorenzo turned back the tramp was gone *
* .. The next day... *

* Morning... Lorenzo woke up because he heard his phone ringing *

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Lorenzo: Yea? Who's this?
Strange Voice: The tramp...
Lorenzo: Ummm... Yes? What do you want?
Strange Voice: I know who are you. I can help you, Come to Ten Green Bottles, 14:00 if you want to hear more.
* The line went dead. *

Lorenzo took his revolver from his drawer and headed to Ten Green Bottles.

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* Lorenzo arrives at the bar, exits his car, exhales and walks straight inside. Inside, at the corner he see's a man. *

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* Lorenzo walks up to the guys and says: * Look cabron, i have a gun, if you'll try anything stupid i will blast your brains away. Got that?
The Stranger: Calm down, i'm here to help you take a seat. My name is David...
* Lorenzo takes a seat and they start talking *
Lorenzo: How do you know my name, who are you?
David: I knew your father, he told me about you and he told me that this day will come.
Lorenzo: What day?
David: The day when he will die, and you will get here with all the money. I was the guy that he was talking about.
Lorenzo: Ohhh... So how will you actualy help me?
David: Well i know how could we start transffering cocaine from Colombia to Los Santos. We could start a fuckin drug cartel in here.
Lorenzo: Well and whats the plan?
David: Well the plan is .... * And they start talking about the plan ... *
* .... After an hour .... *
Lorenzo: I like your plan, when should we start?
David: Like tomorow? I have a some connections, they know the best roads from homeland to L.S... They could drive that shit here.
Lorenzo: Alright lets meet tomorow at the docks, 13:00.
David: See ya tomorow..

*... The next day... 13:00, Docks of Los Santos.
Lorenzo comes to the docks. David is already there, and a strange man with glasses arrived at the same time as Lorenzo.
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David: Lorenzo, this guys here is Sadoa, he will help us with the smuggling...
Sadoa: Hey, Lorenzo, i heard some good things about you, and yes i'm the one who will help you. I've been smuggling shit from Colombia since 1990.
Lorenzo: Alright then, it's settled welcome abord.
David: Alrigh, Lorenzo now we need to speak with a guy that will supply us fast cars. I know one lets head to Unity Station.


* ... At Unity Station ... A japanese guy is already waiting.*
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David: Hey, Koji, How are ya?
Kojiro: Herro, I'm good. What do you want?
David: Lorenzo, how do you think what car should we get?
Lorenzo: Well my father always loved Elegy. We should get it.
David: Elegy it is. Koji we'll need an elegy tuned one.
Kojiro: It should take one week to get it here and it will cost you $1.000.000 Dollars.
David: Deal, call me when she gets here.

* One week later... Lorenzo recieved an sms. *
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* ... David is already waiting with a Elegy *
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David: Beutiful isin't she?
Lorenzo: It is....
David: Wanna take her for a spin?
Lorenzo: Yea sure, lets roll...
* After the ride. *
David: It's a beast
Lorenzo: Yea, it is.
David: Alright now we need headquaters...
Lorenzo: I know a place, i saw it on the way home yesterday lets scope it out.
* They came to the place *
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David: Yeaa... I like this place.
Lorenzo: Thought you'll like it, and it's for sale.
David: I got a buddy, hes an estate agent. We will get this place cheap. I'll call him.
* David called Burt and arranged a deal for the place.
David: Alright it's ours.
Lorenzo: What now?
David: What now? We will start now...


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this http://www.worldfinancialblog.com/enter ... -the-time/
and also "The Cartel" - such originality
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Josh_Moore wrote:this http://www.worldfinancialblog.com/enter ... -the-time/
and also "The Cartel" - such originality
And your point is? You proved that he used some info about Pablo Escobar. WOW! Great job Sherlock.
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david_burrows wrote:
Josh_Moore wrote:this http://www.worldfinancialblog.com/enter ... -the-time/
and also "The Cartel" - such originality
And your point is? You proved that he used some info about Pablo Escobar. WOW! Great job Sherlock.
He proved that you guys are fucking useless, Don't even try to make a gang application after being denied twice.
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Miquel Lacoste wrote:
david_burrows wrote:
Josh_Moore wrote:this http://www.worldfinancialblog.com/enter ... -the-time/
and also "The Cartel" - such originality
And your point is? You proved that he used some info about Pablo Escobar. WOW! Great job Sherlock.
He proved that you guys are fucking useless, Don't even try to make a gang application after being denied twice.
I'm agreeing with a Miquel Lacoste post. LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO
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