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[Approved]"GoodFellas"

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Story Line :
In the late 90's me and my 2 brothers Neger and Charles found the company named "GoodFellas" it origin was in Las Venturas.
It was a wholesale, we sold various things to businesses all around Las Venturas and San Fierro.
But what we also did was white wash cash from maffia's, we did it to get profit of it untill we got tricked.
we got a new big deal... the Russian mafia asked us if we could white wash some money for them but it wasn’t about just SOME cash.
No this was about 20 Million Dollars.
So me and my brothers accepted the deal of course.
After all we should check the man’s back ground, well... this is what happened.

[16/04/1997]: Me and my brothers are chilling at the local golf club swinging some balls.
When suddenly a man comes and walks towards us.
All what he said in the first place was nice suits, when we "accidently" walk straight into him again.
He starts talking again telling us we look like we got some brains about business,
So the man attempts to fool us with a silly trick about financials...
Of course me and my brothers know how to handle those tricks.
while we are thinking about the sum the man gave us he starts asking other questions about a deal he need help with,
He was talking about 20 million for the job so... We took the job.
What we didn’t know was that we would get involved with gun dealing and drugs dealing.
Here is the story:

[21/07/1997]: Deadline is in 2 days, the big smuggle is about to get started.
My two brothers Neger and Charles will go to our warehouse to get the "stuff" he bought of our company.
I would go to the man we were going to deliver the "stuff" to, and try to get some more money of him.
After having a whole conversation with him it worked out pretty good,
We got 25 million on the Cuban bank now instead of 20 million and ready to live life to the fullest.

[8/01/1998]: We got another deal, This time we got kind of a strange feeling about the customer.
He placed a hit on his dad, Which died in 1987 by a terrible car accident well.
that’s what our back ground check told us.
But whatever, We were good trained salesman we knew how to talk and we got a full army covering us.

[9/01/1998]: The next day I woke up at 10, woke up my two brothers and got prepared for the deal,
my brothers went to the stashed trucks and everything worked out how it should.
I got dressed up and ate my food ready to go to our customer, me not knowing I was about getting shot at.
I stepped out the front door, locked it and walked to my car.
at least that’s what I was going to do when two guys drove up my drive way and try to pump me full of bullets.
Glad I worn a bullet proof vest, so I shot back and got one of them down.
I ran back to my car,the one guy that was still alive left his dead friend on the floor as dinner for the rats... cold bastard.
So there I was getting chased by the Mexican mafia...
I got a call from my brother Charles who heard what happened and told me to go to our secret apartments in Los Santos.

So I was still getting chased by the Mexican fucker.
Drove as fast as I could to the place me and my brother agreed to meet.
So I met my brother at the apartments and went to check the area, but nothing was there...
It looked like we got rid of him without him knowing our secret spot.
So we went back to the apartments, when suddenly we hear a car driving up the driveway.
we sneak past the building and catch him at our cars... so we opened our full firepower and killed the poor sucker.
So there we are, in Los Santos.
A whole new country to start business in.
We already made some deals with local businesses, and got great money off of it.
We expand our location and bought new apartments to work in, we also started hiring employee's again.
After that we made great progress in Los Santos.
We found out that there were are alot of civilians that needed a wholesale like us.
We finally found our city...

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Our HQ :

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Members :
- Don Ray (Rank 7)
- Neger Maatje (Rank 6)
- Charles Dickinson (Rank 6)
- Bram Breakdown (Rank 4)
- Young K (Rank 2)
- Davy Mousse (Rank 2)
- Josh Galiardi (Rank 1)
- Broodje Kebab (Rank 1)
- Ren Jie (Rank 1)
- [Adding More Members Later]

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Ranks :
- Rank 7 ( President )
- Rank 6 ( Vice-President )
- Rank 5 ( Manager )
- Rank 4 ( Accountant )
- Rank 3 ( Assistant )
- Rank 2 ( Operator )
- Rank 1 ( Employee )
- Rank 0 ( Trainee )

Rules :
1) Respect all the server rules.
2) No Alts.
3) Respect Higher ranks at all time.
4) Dont insult other players.
5) Dont start a fight solve thing with words, else go to bosses or lt's
6) Do not start a war or you will be automaticly kicked.

Skins :

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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Fujito »

It's not bad ,it's very good , i thought it's goin' to be accepted "Good Luck"
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by daxter 789 »

Yes,the post is very good,but the members are new (I don't want to say that they are newbie).The story is very good,but i don't see you guys to Roleplay often.Never mind.
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Yamoto »

the two agent skins are fbi skins, your lieutenant skin I believe is being used by the current mafia whatever it is, and your boss skin I also believe belongs to Vagos.

you might want to change those
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Charles_Dickinson »

Yamoto wrote:the two agent skins are fbi skins, your lieutenant skin I believe is being used by the current mafia whatever it is, and your boss skin I also believe belongs to Vagos.

you might want to change those
Alright thanks for letting us know
It's kinda hard to tell which skins are from the maffia since they didn't put them in their apply.
Were gonna work on the skins.


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Re: "GoodFellas"

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I updated the skins as you can see, I hope they are good to go now.
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Vladimir_Volkoff »

daxter 789 wrote:,but i don't see you guys to Roleplay often.
You are kidding right? They roleplay like 90% of the time.
You might have not seem them roleplay becouse you are banished.
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Jhonny_Mclanne »

You told me to take some pictures, here they are..

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In my opinion these guys are a pretty tight group.
If you think you don't have enough time to play... think again
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Miquel Lacoste »

You applied for a gang named Sky High Agency' [S.H.A.] and you were being denied. Yet you use the same story from a denied application. You guys exceed my expectations of roleplay and you're a decent group in general so perhaps you're willing to spice up your story aswell.

Unlike many of the new gangs out there, you guys do your things correctly and stay focused on the roleplay and that matters the most, Just don't burn out/fuck up like many new gangs do and you'll do just fine.

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Re: "GoodFellas"

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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Malcolm_Fitzherbert »

I didnt get together with you IG, ya know im banned as well, but by looking at your application i think that you know your shits pretty well, I really enjoyed reading your application, good luck.
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Re: "GoodFellas"

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Nooooooooooooooooo, Badfellas!
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by jimmy_jakens »

Active, English speaking, players of roles. I like em'.
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Re: "GoodFellas"

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Nice post admin give them chance
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Don_Ray »

We bought a business today, we stocked it and its ready to go.
We hope that we can bring some more RP into this.
And this made our RP style much stronger at any angle.
If you didn't check it out here is a post that shows some details!
http://www.szrgta.com/szr/forum/viewtop ... 17&t=26007
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Re: "GoodFellas"

Post by Ari_Papadopoulos »

accpected

fuck everyone in this thread who didn't read the stickied rules at the top of the forums, if you ever make a gang app i will deny it
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