Delta Force Military

[Greg_Tompson]

this is basicly rebelz

[Jacob_Julez]

^ Rebelz were DMer's I don't think this is Rebelz 2.0. Read the story again.

Support x2 :)

[Carlito_Mutalim]

no military forces because they all end up asking for dumb shit such as barracks patriots tanks or even spawn weapons

Im sure you guys are not understanding the concept of my gang application , We are ex soldiers with very few charasterictics of a real Army/military force ,
I am prettey sure we do not take advantage of other players and posess unfair things such as tanks ,spawn weapons ect nor was we thinking of asking for it .

Ok carlito, if your not a military faction, why are you asking for a radio chat, why is your family called "Delta Force MILITARY" and why would the pd ask help from civilians. Also why do you still call yourself General Carlito if your an ex-marine? See theres alot of misleading information on your application that you need to set straight. Lastly, a militia is not a military faction.

Please read my application carefully and you shall find your answers to your questions. I had said in another post that we are ex soldiers with very few charasterictics of a real army so we may have radio (roleplayed in /g chat ) . We are not going to help PD if you had seen what i wrote in brackets at the end of the story then you would have understood. Last of all did i say i was a militia?

Just to make it clear we are not a DM faction. :)

[Carlito_Mutalim]

The story has been edited. I've taken on the feedback and made adjustments. Find something else to pick on.

[Greg_Tompson]

http://www.szrgta.com/szr/forum/viewtop ... 47&t=18503

will this ever happen?

[Heath_Ledger]

Fix oath, take out ''server'' and change it to something else. Also, change military into something else since the faction isnt one, as you mentioned. Otherwise great effort.

[Carlito_Mutalim]

http://www.szrgta.com/szr/forum/viewtop ... 47&t=18503

will this ever happen?

No I am sure this would not happen again ,it was a stupid mistake which i had not known it was an illegal act,We are humans and humans make mistake ,I have been punished for this and have learnt from my mistake .

why is everyone tying to find a bad point ,I have spent so much time on this application atleast do the honours of supporting and not putting me off .

Fix oath, take out ''server'' and change it to something else. Also, change military into something else since the faction isnt one, as you mentioned. Otherwise great effort.

Thank you Heath for giving me points to improve on and I thank everyone else for the support .

[BigAssGoat]

why is everyone tying to find a bad point ,I have spent so much time on this application atleast do the honours of supporting and not putting me off .

Running a gang is not only about being a cool writer and creating a story. thats why

[The Captain]

^ Rebelz were DMer's

Nah.

[Carlito_Mutalim]

why is everyone tying to find a bad point ,I have spent so much time on this application atleast do the honours of supporting and not putting me off .

Running a gang is not only about being a cool writer and creating a story. thats why

Yes i am aware of this ,I am determined to take on anything which approaches me , but all m saying is why look for small inappropriate things just to make me look bad ?

[Robbie Jay]

Carlito ignore other peeps replies , afterall it's up to the new gang forum guy hehe . So lets just wait for a reply for him and that's that .

[BigAssGoat]

Forum guy maybe cares about you being ignorant and saying ''DM'' all the time. It doesn't really matter anyway. It's not gonna be the forum guy playing with you. It's gonna be the people posting in this thread and that's why you should get them on the good side.

[Carlito_Mutalim]

Forum guy maybe cares about you being ignorant and saying ''DM'' all the time. It doesn't really matter anyway. It's not gonna be the forum guy playing with you. It's gonna be the people posting in this thread and that's why you should get them on the good side.

Sorry you lost me is that twards me or someone else because i do not recall my self calling DM all the time ?
Also I have no problems with other members if they treat me properly i treat them the same .

[Robbie Jay]

That was Melisa saying DM , neither me or Carlito said anything about it . I don't like complaining . And people who come in here to complain about the fam will probably never be friends with us so why bother trying to explain them what we all about when they will hate no matter what .

[Heath_Ledger]

Forum guy maybe cares about you being ignorant and saying ''DM'' all the time. It doesn't really matter anyway. It's not gonna be the forum guy playing with you. It's gonna be the people posting in this thread and that's why you should get them on the good side.

great point.

[Rick_Johnson]

Indeed, it will be good to have other peoples view but the truth that covers this all is, Carlito will be a successful leader and he won't bring up a family like Rebelz who became inactive and dropped out by the DM. Carlito won't take advantages by asking for shizzle that other people wont be able to get. He plays it fair and he wont compare himself to another family and think that he should get better cars/hq etc.

[mike_mocanu]

Carlito will be a successful leader and he won't bring up a family like Rebelz who became inactive and dropped out by the DM. Carlito won't take advantages by asking for shizzle that other people wont be able to get. He plays it fair and he wont compare himself to another family and think that he should get better cars/hq etc.

You got a little thing for this guy?

[Rick_Johnson]

Carlito will be a successful leader and he won't bring up a family like Rebelz who became inactive and dropped out by the DM. Carlito won't take advantages by asking for shizzle that other people wont be able to get. He plays it fair and he wont compare himself to another family and think that he should get better cars/hq etc.

You got a little thing for this guy?

Infact I do, He got my support.

[Vag]

isn't that your brother irl

[Carlito_Mutalim]

Rick thanks bro.
Funny how the majority of people making negative comments are members of other new gangs which have applied..hmm jealous much ,am i going to be competition for you ? :D

[Rick_Johnson]

isn't that your brother irl

I'm proud to be his step-bro. Got a problem with that?

[Khamal Tafari]

keep posting i wanna see who wins

[Carlito_Mutalim]

keep posting i wanna see who wins

I politley ask you to leave my application , no one is here to fight or argue ,so keep my thread clean.
Thanks in advance!

[Khamal Tafari]

nice comeback

[Dom]

http://www.szrgta.com/szr/forum/viewtop ... 47&t=18503

will this ever happen?

this really does not look good on your application.