The Clowns
The Story:
My dad was a clown he was keeping the peoples joking all the time they was giving him money, all the peoples know him and called him the Clown but after five months when he was doing things to peoples he died because of something falling from high
I was dont know about this story i was in the school i’m 12 years old i asked my mother how did my dad die she lied at me but i started again and asked her how how how after that she told me your dad was a clown and dead by…..
And my school need money i cant complete in the school and we havent money what should i do
I was alone and searching for a job i was thinking to be a Clown like my dad and let the peoples joking i need to be a Clown to get some money when i was doing like my dad a girl saw me and she said to the school principal and to her friends boys/girls and they called me the Clown and i get kicked from the school after that my mother dead and now im a Clown.
Members:
Leader:
Chan_Wong/Wong
Tylor_Wong/?
Darrg_yang/?
James_Barry/?
Jason_Wizzle/?
Ranks Name:
7-Clowny
6-Big Clown
5-Sander
4-hug
3-Sick Clown
2-Medium Clown
1-Goon
0-Newbie Clown
Desired Skins:
http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_264.png
http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_252.png
http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_241.png
http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_200.png
http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_142.png
http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_197.png
http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_129.png
Desired HQ:
The Clowns
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The Clowns
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Last edited by Wong on November 17th, 2011, 11:14 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: The Clowns
The story needs more effort.
Re: The Clowns
It's a half decent app in my opinon. But honestly, it needs more effort, and it dosen't really make much sense.
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Re: The Clowns
I didn't like the story , I think that it's incompleted , add some actions and some shits to let the story be more than regular and to attract the others.
Same blood same mode
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Re: The Clowns
Well, the story Not As good As we Wang, but you can deepen and
Should adjusted after the rules,good luck sir.
Should adjusted after the rules,good luck sir.
Re: The Clowns
Chan Wong is chill as hell. That is all.