Wapkins Green Sa News Aplication.

[Wapkins_Green]

IC:
Character name:Wapkins_Green
Date of birth:1/1/1988
Phone number:922718
Address/general location 21 Glenpark road (optional):


OOC:
Names of any alts you have/had on SZR:None only wapkins
Previous roleplay experience, including other servers I played on Everlast Project Reality LS RP Godfarther too many to remember :p (optional):
Will your news character be your primary character? Yes it will be (optional):

IC:
A brief description of what brought you here. I'v always wanted to be in San News since i was a little Kid, I love telling the People of LS whats happening around the City.. (Was it a recommendation? A wanted ad? Simple whimsy? Something else?):

A brief description of why you feel you'd be an asset to our team Im Funny, Friendly, Clever, a Nice Man to have on the Team. I'v got alot of Experince with Computers i got Good Grades in School too. (feel free to include relevant skills and/or achievements):

An example of your writing in the two formats ((Article format, no less than 50 words, and in-game /news format, no less than 7 lines. See below for examples. Update: Wackiness (being outrageous) won't get you hired, and please try not to report on the common subjects - Nurgle, UFOs, combat situations, action stories, etc. Made up interviews will NOT be accepted.)):

Today is the day that the new Saw Movie Comes out, Im here with Chairman Billy Rogers to talk about it.. So Billy whats this Movie about then? Billy: Its a Horror Movie about some People that get Tortured, Wow that seems Scary! How long did it take it make it? Billy: It took us around 4 Mounths too make it the Crew had some fun doing it and we think its going to be a great Movie.

/news Breaking News Bank Robbery at LS Bank Police are on the scene still.
/news The Bank is going to be Closed for a Couple of Days, The bank Robberys got away with a Large Sum of Money.
/news Witnesses say they saw Several Masked Men Escape in a Black Burrito Van.
/news Thats all for now, we will be back when we find out more about this Shocking Crime, This was Wapkins Green with Sa News, Have a nice Day and stay safe.

Any additional comments (optional):

[Tommy_Gavin]

Horrible grammar, capitalization errors, punctuation errors, and just rather boring. You are better of just staying in the Babalonians.

[Wapkins_Green]

Fuck off you aint a Reporter so dont go round insulting everyone you fucking geek

[John Reed]

Fuck off you aint a Reporter so dont go round insulting everyone you fucking geek

You are out of babs for being gay 'n' stupid.
p.s. look at Tommy Gavin's signature, jackass

[Banjo]

Here a few helpful tips, incase you wish to re-apply:
• Capitalize ONLY the words that need to be capitalized.
• Here at SANews, we LOVE commata, fullstops and exclamation marks. So do your best by including them into your application!
• *sigh*, I have to write this to 80% of the applicants. I know it says "MINIMUM 50 WORDS", but that is the MINIMUM, which will not get you far.
• Last one: LET US SEE THAT YOU ARE 'SERIOUS' ABOUT THIS! EFFORT, EFFORT, EFFORT!

[Tommy_Gavin]

Fuck off you aint a Reporter so dont go round insulting everyone you fucking geek

Nope I'm not a reporter, I'm an anchor, which for your information is a higher rank than reporter. I did not insult you, I merely pointed out some of your mistakes to help you improve your next application. Even in this post you capitalized a word that does not require capitalization, forgot 2 apostrophes, a comma, and a period. So why don't you fuck off.

[Dom]

This dude's got alotta e-rage. Plus, how many people have done bank robbery stories? Those are starting to get old.

[Ykraiina]

Here a few helpful tips, incase you wish to re-apply:
• Capitalize ONLY the words that need to be capitalized.
• Here at SANews, we LOVE commata, fullstops and exclamation marks. So do your best by including them into your application!
• *sigh*, I have to write this to 80% of the applicants. I know it says "MINIMUM 50 WORDS", but that is the MINIMUM, which will not get you far.
• Last one: LET US SEE THAT YOU ARE 'SERIOUS' ABOUT THIS! EFFORT, EFFORT, EFFORT!

PIMPLEMOOSE you have disappeared into thin air! Where have you been you german bastard.