Paolo_Lorenzo, News Application (new)

[Yamoto]

IC:
Character name: Paolo_Lorenzo
Date of birth: 11.6.79
Phone number:599678
Address/general location (optional): My little carbored box outside Yoshimart


OOC:
Names of any alts you have/had on SZR: Lewis_Katsumoto Level 11, 4 dragons
Previous roleplay experience, including other servers (optional): Been on the server for around 3 months so quite abit of experiance
Will your news character be your primary character? (optional): Secondry

IC:
A brief description of what brought you here. (Was it a recommendation? A wanted ad? Simple whimsy? Something else?): I normally sneak around LS looking for gossip and i love to tell other people what i found out. My friend had join the SAnews team and he told that i should apply for a job so i thought il go for it

A brief description of why you feel you'd be an asset to our team (feel free to include relevant skills and/or achievements): I like to get gossip and find out alot of different storys which are happining aroud LS. I will dig deep to get the story and go to any lengths.

An example of your writing in the two formats ((Article format, no less than 50 words, and in-game /news format, no less than 7 lines. See below for examples. Update: Wackiness (being outrageous) won't get you hired, and please try not to report on the common subjects - Nurgle, UFOs, combat situations, action stories, etc. Made up interviews will NOT be accepted.)):

As a normal day goes by in Los Santos more and more people head to the newly built Four Dragons Casino. Citizens have been waiting for the Casino to open for 3 months now and there loving every bit of it sice its been open . The Casino has been open for 3 weeks now and workers of Los Santos are loving every minute of there gambling at this excelent place BUT there are a suprising amount of people who do not like the Casino and they are the Housewives oh yes, The housewives are not ammused by this extravagant place and they are complaining that it is draging more and more of there husbands into the Four Dragons Casino and that they are spending there wages and gas bills and putting it on the line to win some extra cash. The Casino isnt all about gambling though there are two resturants inside the Casino and a massive bar for all you alcahol lovers. To see there food menu check out there posters which are place all around the city. So what you waiting for get down there today!!!

/news Hello Los Santos, This is Paolo Bringing you your late night news
/news A new drug was formed yesterday in most of the City drug stores
/news This drug is known to make you 50% faster in everything
/news Could this be true? or just another way to take your money
/news Well i tried it and ive been given 10 out of 10 in bed
/news Maybe you should try it today!!
/news This has been Paolo, Stay safe Los Santos

Any additional comments (optional):

[Ykraiina]

I find your writing amusing and creative although grammar and spelling mistakes litter your application. You have a good sense of humor and I have a feeling you would be a good asset to our team. /news format and newsroom format are correct and it seems like you got the hang of it. I'd say give you a chance and see how it plays out. We'll see what the rest of the news folk think.

[Banjo]

I am glad that you improved a lot, considering your old application! Also, that you completely re-did it, shows us, that you are 'serious' about this and will not let people put you off.

I agree with Luca, you're accepted! Please read the Rules & Guidelines in the private forum, which you now have access to!
Contact me in-game for an invite!