Tony Violi's news reporter application (new)

[Tony_Violi]

In character:
Character name: Tony_Violi
Date of birth: n/a
Phone number: 679138
Address/general location (optional): Vinewood hills


Out of character:
Names of any alts you have/had on SZR: n/a
Previous roleplay experience, including other servers (optional): Admin on Project Reality, and played there for a long time. It's a strict RP server that means that you have to roleplay everything you do! Have been playing SZR for a time and I try roleplaying the best as i can.
Will your news character be your primary character? (optional): Yes

In character:
A brief description of what brought you here. (Was it a recommendation? A wanted ad? Simple whimsy? Something else?): I find the reporter job very interesting, and my friend John said that I should join.

A brief description of why you feel you'd be an asset to our team (feel free to include relevant skills and/or achievements): I feel like I'm qualified to update the citizens of Los Santos with the freshest and most important news. My friends tell me that I'm good at English even thought I'm Norwegian!

An example of your writing in the two formats ((Article format, no less than 50 words, and in-game /news format, no less than 7 lines. See below for examples. Update: Wackiness (being outrageous) won't get you hired, and please try not to report on the common subjects - Nurgle, UFOs, combat situations, action stories, etc. Made up interviews will NOT be accepted.)):

Riots at the Grove St.
The Grove street is known for it's extreme violence. One day the hell broke out! Ballas and Grove met and it turned into a gun firefight. The police was on the place only a half hour after it started. The news helicopter was circling round the place and updating the citizens, but he also got shot at. The police managed to control them after a while, but it was not soon enough. In this gunfire 13 people got killed and 6 injured.

(I suck at comming up with stories, my fantasy is on the bottom)

/news This is your host Tony, broadcasting live from Grove st.
/news Extreme riots broke out at Grove today at 12:00.
/news Our sources says it got way out of hand, during a drug deal, as now has been confirmed!
/news The police is on site and trying to control the strong firefights.
/news I recommend you stay out of that place until the police have taken control.
/news Do you have any tips or information about this give us a call! (( /call news ))
/news We got a call and John tells me that the Ballas family is pulling out and surrender.
/news I will come back to you with more information about this later.
/news This was Tony, bringing you the hottest news any time at day!

Any additional comments (optional):
I'm playing szr alot of my spare time, and I want to do something for the server. Then I got a tips from my friend John_Torino about joining the news force, well so I did.

Best reggards
~Tony Violi

[Ole_Tomsom]

ahahaha

EDIT:
Sorry Ari, wont repeat.
Didnt read what you said in the last News reporter app i posted in..

[Tommy_Gavin]

OLE TOMSOM YOU ARE ABOUT TO BE FORUM BANNED, GET OUT OF HERE!! AVAST, ME HEARTIES!! AVAST, ME HEARTIES!

[Ykraiina]

Your newsroom format is missing completely and your application suffers from grammar and spelling mistakes. Put a little more effort into it, and show me an IC newsroom example.

[Banjo]

Your newsroom format is missing completely and your application suffers from grammar and spelling mistakes. Put a little more effort into it, and show me an IC newsroom example.

I'll say!
Although your in-game article isn't too bad, it lacks a bit of deeper content.
and PLEASE, if you do decide to complete your application, please please please write more than 50 words and make it look nice [eg paragraphs, heading, pictures]


Good Luck!

[Tony_Violi]

I can't come up with stories. x)

[Ykraiina]

I can't come up with stories. x)

eeeekk

[Banjo]

I can't come up with stories. x)

eeeekk

Don't you think that this might be a problem?

[Tommy_Gavin]

I can't come up with stories. x)

Then just how do expect to be news reporter? I vote no, based on this statement alone.

[Dom]

I can't come up with stories. x)

Then just how do expect to be news reporter? I vote no, based on this statement alone.

[Tony_Violi]

No I dont think so. Since this job is not comming up with stories, just to broadcast them.

[Tommy_Gavin]

No I dont think so. Since this job is not comming up with stories, just to broadcast them.

Denied