Debt & Penalty JSC

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Debt & Penalty JSC

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Gang Name: Debt & Penalty JSC

Gang Description:

Two brothers appear in Los Santos disguised as mere architects employed in the Construction industry, their genuine business unbeknown to the public. Well-mannered gentlemen who are in fact notorious underground loan sharks, recognized by some as Debt & Penalty JSC, they specialize in two things: Extortion and blackmail.

Mr. G scratches his hardcap, having a grim look on his face. He turns to his colleague, Mr. Dice, nodding.

Mr. G - Let him in, Mr. Moreson.
Moreson - Yes, Mr. G!

You stumble into the well designed room, sweaty, teary eyes, legs are weakening.

Man - Please... Mr. G, you must understand! I have nothing left to give!
Mr. G - Ahh but there is plenty left to give.
Man - Please! You've shattered my empire, taken my money... I can't do this anymore!
Mr. G - It is not of importance whether or not you can continue, the question is.... Can I?
Mr. G - I most certainly can.
Man - You two are monsters, why are you doing this to me goddamn it?
Mr. G - I advise you not to anger me, for the consequences shall be severe!
Mr. Dice - Most severe.
Mr. G - Indeed.
Mr. Dice – Without a doubt, Mr. G.
Mr. G - Continue, Mr. Dice.
Mr. Dice - Certainly, Mr. G.

Mr. Dice walks over to a cupboard and takes out a document wallet.
Mr. Dice throws it to you.


You take a look inside the document, you notice a picture of a female bound with ropes, you glare at it for a moment before realising it is your Wife

Man – Nooo! You can kill me, but I beg of you.. Please don’t harm my Wife.
Mr. Dice – We have no intention of killing you, we only desire what is owed to us.
Man - H-H-How much more do I have to give?!

Mr. Dice ponders for a moment. He then takes the document wallet from you and reveals a chart.

Mr. Dice – According to this, you owe us a further $100,000.
Mr. G – US Dollars, yes.
Mr. Dice – That is correct, Mr. G.
Mr. G – Considering you have previously paid us $1,100,000, I’m sure you can come up with an additional 9%!

Man – I will get you the money... Please don’t hurt my Wife!
Mr. Dice – Ahh, if I don’t receive that money in two days, I will in fact be inclined to hurt her.
Mr. G – The choice is yours. Now we must be going, we have business to attend to.
Mr. Dice – Indeed.
Mr. G – Moreson! Show this man out.
Moreson – Certainly, Sir.



THE END


Headquarters:

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(Big thanks to ‘’someone’’ for giving us the Crane, Dozer, Rocks, Fence, Doors and whatnot, you’re awesome, thanks!)


Why?:

I'm certain I can handle the position as leader, I've been on this server for quite a while and I've achieved 1200+ playing hours on various alts. Furthermore, we're going to focus a lot on RP, I believe this faction will bring an original type of roleplay to the server. We also feel like we've got quite an original theme going, as most gang-applicants attempt to create some kind of street-thug-like gang nowadays.


Members:

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Boss:
Amir_G/Amir_G - 7

Members:
Sean_Dice/Khamal_Tafari - 6
Jasper_Wilde/Jasper_Wilde - 5
Jordan_Jackson/Vag - 4
Kazumi_Sakura/Yarbo_Moreson - 3
Sean_Paul/Sean_Paul - 3
Eddie_Jacobs/WISE_SHITOWL - 2
Joe_Johnson/X - 1


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Boss
- 153

Members
- 16
- 27
- 260

‘’You’re entering a world of debts''






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Support. Nice story + english.
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thats my turf optimus prime gunnin 4 u
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Dom wrote:thats my turf optimus prime gunnin 4 u
http://szrgta.com/szr/forum/viewtopic.php?f=109&t=13016

hi, im sean dice
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who gives a fuck lspr is closed / ed waldsmith burnt out


optimus prime gonna be fucking you guys up
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Dom wrote:who gives a fuck lspr is closed / ed waldsmith burnt out


optimus prime gonna be fucking you guys up
so how does that make it yours
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If anyone these dudes know how to ~RP~. Keep it up, and good luck with the app.
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Khamal Tafari wrote:
so how does that make it yours
you obviously don't know team prime
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I've known these guys for a while and they're both cool guys, and good RPers, good luck with the family boys 8-)

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As I told Sean earlier count on me
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Dom wrote:
Khamal Tafari wrote:
so how does that make it yours
you obviously don't know team prime
please inform me
why don't you shut the fuck up
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Nice gang. It looks a lot like SACC, but from the app, I gather that that is not true.

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It looks absolutely nothing like SACC :cripes:

SACC was a big scam facton for the boss, who took worthless newbies into his faction, made them run mats and literally paid them less than they had spent for the mats. SACC were a company who sold mats.

This is a extortion/loan shark faction. Although I don't play here anymore, you have my support for this, as I believe SZR hasn't really had anything like this, and if they had, it was a long long time ago. So good luck mate :bunchies:
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Good story, good members, good luck
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You guys are cool and ya talk like in the MATRIX
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Thank you everyone who's supported us so far.
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They're pretty good, enjoy talking to them...

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Take it from a professional, loan sharking and extortion do not work on SZR.
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Support, Amir G my man!
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Awesome guys who know how to rp.

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David_York wrote:Take it from a professional, loan sharking and extortion do not work on SZR.
ok tell him to call me
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David_York wrote:Take it from a professional, loan sharking and extortion do not work on SZR.
Dude, we've already made it work a number of times. :smug:
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Amir_G wrote:
David_York wrote:Take it from a professional, loan sharking and extortion do not work on SZR.
Dude, we've already made it work a number of times. :smug:
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