Beytra's At The Town

Kenji Beytra · Post by **Kenji Beytra** » March 30th, 2011, 9:49 am

Removed.

Cazzum_Karawora · Post by **Cazzum_Karawora** » March 30th, 2011, 10:01 am

Good members , and Nice story
you took my Support

Kid Jello · Post by **Kid Jello** » March 30th, 2011, 10:08 am

It's so good App' , Good luck Kenji i hope that it will be accept.
Support!!!

Kenji Beytra · Post by **Kenji Beytra** » March 30th, 2011, 10:14 am

Thanks for the support guy's

Marcin_Saboter · Post by **Marcin_Saboter** » March 30th, 2011, 10:25 am

I'm really impressed with your story, they are interesting and you can took my support

Good luck

702.0 · Post by **Hippo Congruency** » March 30th, 2011, 10:27 am

I think none of you three have read one word of the story, you just said nice application because it is long.

You should work on your english first, and fix the typos in your story. I didn't read all of it because reading the first few words was enough to know it isn't worth reading all of it.
A russian mafia/crime family has been used alot so it's not really original.

Kenji Beytra · Post by **Kenji Beytra** » March 30th, 2011, 10:29 am

Well, i will work to fix my english , but the family name doesn't matter !!!!

702.0 · Post by **Hippo Congruency** » March 30th, 2011, 10:39 am

It's not the name it is the theme

And I read half of the story and it's really boring, I don't know how it works in your country but over here an ammunation doesn't ask which organization/family/whatever else you're in, and when you answer you are in a crime family they'll either call the cops or just throw you out because ammunations are legal, and as far as I know you didn't mention it's an illegal gun store so you I assume it's a legal one.

Add more details, how did you find out who killed your dad? This story is all about you moving around and you trying to find the one who killed your dad to kill him, when you were talking to the guy in the gun store you said you were in a 'russian crime family' but how did you get in a russian crime family? You've never mentioned that either.

Kid Jello · Post by **Kid Jello** » March 30th, 2011, 10:40 am

Hippo Congruency wrote:I think none of you three have read one word of the story, you just said nice application because it is long.

I read it and i saw it is Nice But He Must to Fix His English .

436.0 · Post by **lukesea** » March 30th, 2011, 10:48 am

Kid Jello wrote:
Hippo Congruency wrote:I think none of you three have read one word of the story, you just said nice application because it is long.
I read it and i saw it is Nice But He Must to Fix His English .

The irony

Kobayashi · Post by **Kobayashi** » March 30th, 2011, 11:04 am

Shit app shit gang shit members.
UnSupported!

Tom Damon · Post by **Tom Damon** » March 30th, 2011, 11:10 am

You will never be kirchoff/brigada 4

Kenji Beytra · Post by **Kenji Beytra** » March 30th, 2011, 11:14 am

Tom Damon wrote:You will never be kirchoff/brigada 4

First of all i am not trying to be a kirchoff/brigada
and the second thing is that i am trying to make my own family
and at the last you will see that i will get it .

Kenji Beytra · Post by **Kenji Beytra** » March 30th, 2011, 11:16 am

Kobayashi wrote:Shit app shit gang shit members.
UnSupported!

you don't know my member's to say that they are a shit guy's and i think that you didn't read the app'.
And i don't care for the .......like you!

Francois_Raffray · Post by **Francois_Raffray** » March 30th, 2011, 11:30 am

It seems really you have good members and nice story

Then!!you got my support

Good luck

Evgeniy_Semenov · Post by **Evgeniy_Semenov** » March 30th, 2011, 11:57 am

Yes, that is a good way to get support for your app..**
Nice story good way...

Support[/u]

SoapMacTavish · Post by **SoapMacTavish** » March 30th, 2011, 12:38 pm

Weird how Evgeniy_Semenov and Francois_Raffray only have one post....

Mike_Tucker · Post by **Mike_Tucker** » March 30th, 2011, 12:40 pm

Cool Story it's very Nice I read it all from the start to the end .

Also you got pretty members .

I think that your gang will be accepted .

702.0 · Post by **Hippo Congruency** » March 30th, 2011, 12:42 pm

I'm starting to think he is making new forum accounts to support his own gang app

Kenji Beytra · Post by **Kenji Beytra** » March 30th, 2011, 12:48 pm

Hippo Congruency wrote:I'm starting to think he is making new forum accounts to support his own gang app

Nah....... you are at the wrong side , i am not making another accounts to support you can chack at the game that this account is playing And ask anyone about them .
So don't try to .......
they support me because the app' is good and the member's too

SoapMacTavish · Post by **SoapMacTavish** » March 30th, 2011, 12:50 pm

Well, maybe admins should check the ip's?

Westy · Post by **Westy** » March 30th, 2011, 12:51 pm

Well great your HQ is so close to mine, well at the back of mine, but anyway good luck.

Kenji Beytra · Post by **Kenji Beytra** » March 30th, 2011, 12:52 pm

SoapMacTavish wrote:Weird how Evgeniy_Semenov and Francois_Raffray only have one post....

I don't know but you must to ask them not me !!

Westy · Post by **Westy** » March 30th, 2011, 1:37 pm

I unsupport this as i personally think you have no idea how to run a gang or how it works, and why is rank 0 soldier and rank 1 and 2 recruit, maybe put rank 2 soldier and rank 0 / 1 recruit.

Drake_Einstein · Post by **Drake_Einstein** » March 30th, 2011, 1:48 pm

I will not give you my useless Support,

• Andry Paul is R5? I haven't seen him In-game.

• Well, I don't like this story.

• Honestly, Ive seen you one time in-game or something like that, you don't have the required experience to lead a family/gang.

SZR GTA

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