La Onda ( This one is real )

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La Onda ( This one is real )

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La Onda

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Los Santos. 14th May 1991 14:00

Judge: Officer, please bring us the evidence.
* Officer brings a tape player and some tapes *
Lawyer: In this tape you will all hear when both accused are talking about their plans!
* The hall starts talking *
Judge: Silence!
* Judge starts banging the table with his mallet *
Judge: Lawyer, please continue.
Lawyer: Thank you. Officer, please turn on the player and play the first tape.
* While officer is getting everything ready lawyer continues talking *
Lawyer: We have recorded their phonecalls for 2 months and finally we cought them.
* Tape starts playing , and you hear a conversation*

* DB: Buenos diaz cabron.
NG: Hola, hola. Whats up?
DB: Nothin, are you and the vatos ready to move?
NG: Yea, couldn't sleep all night, i get nervous before shit like that.
DB: Did Lorenzo hook us up with guns?
NG: Si, and did you speak with Burt about the ride?
DB: Yea i did, he'll be waiting for us like we planned.
NG:So that means we're off to go?
DB: Si, for sure lets go and take back what the pigs took from us.
The conversation ends. *

Judge: Mister Burrows, What can you say about this?
Burrows: Nothin, you can't proof nothing with this shit.
Judge: Watch your language.
Burrows: Whatever...
Lawyer: This may not prove anything, but it's not all the evidence i got here.
Green: May you speed this shit up please?
* Burrows laughs *
* Judge starts banging with the mallet again *
Judge: Both of you shut up, or i will send you to jail right now.
Green: Whuuuuuteva...
Judge: Lawyer, please continue
* Judge takes a sip of water *
Lawyer: Officer please play this video tape
* Officer puts on the tape and you can see a video starting *
Lawyer: In this video you can clearly see when the accused are breaking in the police departament of Los Santos and they are going to take their confiscated cocaine.
Lawyer: In this part you see mister Burrows and Green putting their cocaine in the bags, and now you see that Green for some reason takes a bag of marijuana from a shelve.
* Green laughs *
Green: I just like green stuff, can't help my self, hehe.
* The video ends *
Lawyer: So here you all crealy saw Burrows and Green stealing from the Police Departament.
Judge: Mister Burrows and mister Green, what can you say about this?
Green: Get over with this crap faster and send me to jail! I want to see all my cousins in there.
Burrows: Do whatever you want, i wont say nothin.
Judge: I sentece you both to do 10 years of prison in the prison of Los Santos. Say goodbye to your relatives.
* Burrows hugs Lorenzo and say quietly: Hermano de la buena suerte, ver su espalda.
Judge: Officer, please take them away.
* Officer puts handscuffs on Burrows and Green, and takes them away...

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10 Years later
* Burrows and Green leaves the PD
* Lorenzo is already waiting for them outside *

Lorenzo: Hermanos!!!!
Burrows: Yooo, ese. 10 fuckin' long years and we're finaly out.
Green; Si, ese. It's good to smell the fresh air...
Lorenzo: Gimme your bags imma put 'em in the car.
* Lorenzo puts their bags in the trunk *
Lorenzo: Alright lets roll, I got some coronas in the car.
* Everyone gets in the car and Lorenzo starts the engine. *
Lorenzo: So what will you do now?
Burrows: Same shit we alaways did, hehe
Green: True that.
Lorenzo: I knew that 10 years won't be enough for you two...
* Everyone starts laughing *
Burrows: Lets round up all the eses and continue our work...

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Re: La Onda ( This one is real )

Post by Miquel Lacoste »

Plagiarizing a story will get your application and all future applications automatically denied.
http://www.szrgta.com/szr/forum/viewtop ... 03&t=25840
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Re: La Onda ( This one is real )

Post by Lorenzo_Makar »

Miquel Lacoste wrote:
Plagiarizing a story will get your application and all future applications automatically denied.
http://www.szrgta.com/szr/forum/viewtop ... 03&t=25840
So what? that one got denied,and this story writed David_Burrows,so stfu.
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Re: La Onda ( This one is real )

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Lorenzo_Makar wrote:
Miquel Lacoste wrote:
Plagiarizing a story will get your application and all future applications automatically denied.
http://www.szrgta.com/szr/forum/viewtop ... 03&t=25840
So what? that one got denied,and this story writed David_Burrows,so stfu.
He's perfectly correct. Your gang is permadenied for plagiarism. I didn't read any of that story but I'm sure it's dogshit.

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