SZR GTA

Who are THE TRIADS?

Triads are Chinese mafia who work in drug deals,they make money on robberies and they do illegal jobs.They were created by James Barry and Takahashi JC Yung.In first they were small robbers and they were hidden in drug houses in Hong Kong.After few years when they got more members they moved all over to the Los Santos.Now they live there.

Family History:

In 1760s a guy called James Barry was a nerd and everybody hated him in his school.So that day he was walking around Chinatown and he saw some bullies there.As everybody hated him..He was sad without any money,any futur..So after few years he made one of the biggest criminal organizations in the world.They were called Triads.Their bussiness started with a drug deal with Chain gang.The meeting was supposed to be at LS AirPort.Mr.Barry's men opend all doors and put their guns in the trunks.
LOS SANTOS AIRPORT


Mr Barry:Anthony,when will they come?
Anthony:They have to come now,every moment.
They waited for few minuets when Chain gang showed up.
Mr Barry:Here they are..All set?
Takahashi and Anthony:YES!
Mr Barry:Hello,do you have the drugs?
Mr Kimoto:Yes..You got our cash?
Anthony:We have it.
So they started dealing and everybody seemed careful.
Suddenly a plane fel from the sky.
Mr Barry:What the fuck was that!?
Mr Kimoto:We don't know.What about an aliens?
Takahashi:Ignore that, we have to continue.
During they drug deal a guy was landing in a parachuate and he fel on the AirPort roof.
That guy was a FBI spy but nobody noticed him.
Mr Barry:Who is that guy on that roof?
Anthony:That Chain gang's trap! Shoot them!
Everbody started shooting and running around.Anthony enterd a helicopter and we all enterd but Mr Barry got a bullet.
Takahashi:Shit,our boss was shot.We must take him to the hospital.So,Anthony landed near hospital and doctors looked after him.So Triads went to revenge.Mr Barry was still in hospital.Anthony,Takahashi went to Chain gang's HQ and they started to shoot everyone and they killed all of the Chains members but Trids were very hurt.Only Chains leader was still alive.But in that moment Mr Barry walked in and killed the Chain gang's leader.Antony and Takahashi survied.They grabbed their money and drugs.And they went to live Las Venutras.(LV)As they needed more money and drugs…They went to gamble in Caligula's casino.
CALIGULA'S CASINO


Dealer of poker cards was a men in black with glasses.
Pokercard dealer:Hello
Mr Barry:Sayonara,how do we earn cash around here?
Pokercard dealer:Well,you can gamble.
Mr Barry:Can I deposit 1Milion $ in this game?
Pokercard dealer:That's too much.But okay.
Takahshi whispers to Yung:He seems a good man lets try to get in a bussiness with him.
Barry:Sir,can we talk somewhere in peace?
Takahashi:What's your name,anyways?
Pokercard dealer:Xiao Lou.
Barry:Okay,Xiao.Where shall we meet?
Xiao:Chinatown in San Fierro.
Takahashi:Okay we will be there.
Barry takes out a cellphone.
…Yung:Kashi park your helicopter on the Caligula's casino roof.
Anthony hang up…
Barry,Takahashi,Nick and some more guys were drving in a car.They pulled over near Chinatown.
CHINATOWN



Nick:This seems a dangerous neighbourhood.
Barry:Fuck yea.
Xiao is approaching out of a China restaurant with two bodyguard on his back.
Barry:Okay,let's talk about bussines..
Takahashi:Who ownes this place?
Xiao:I do.
Nick:Let's go to a peacefull place in it.
Xiao:Okay..Have you ever robbed something? You seem dangerous.
Barry:We're Street robbers.We robbed a plenty of people.
Mr Barry didn't want to blow his cover.
Nick:We want to rob something what is full of motherfucking cash.
Xiao:BANK!!!
Barry:Sounds good.You got the plan of the building?
Xiao:No..
Takahashi pulls out a paper with a map of the San Fierro.
Takahashi:There's a bank.But we still don't have the inside plan.
Nick:I can call my friend called John.He knows that.
Nick takes out a cellphone.
Nick(cellphone):Justen,can you send me an SMS of Post bank in SF.
Justen(cellphone):Yeah,sure.
Justen sends the SMS straightaway.
Nick:Here.
Nick shows the SMS.
Xiao:Perfect!!!!!
Barry:Okay,we got the plan,we all go and we must hurry.
Xiao:Meet me at the Sex Shop in front of the bank in midnight.Dont be late!
Barry,Takahashi and Nick walked away.They went into the nearest hotel in Chinatown.
Barry:This is very suspicios to me.We just met a guy and we already are doing bussiness with him.
Nick:It doesn't matters…We just need the cash..Fuck that guy.


MIDNIGHT IN FRONT OF SEXSHOP
Xiao:Hello.
Barry:Sup.
Xiao:Are you ready?
Nick:Yes,but will we get in?
Xiao:On the roof by a rope than we will open the ventilation hole and hop in.
Barry:Cameras?
Takahashi:We have Silenced Pistols in my bag.We will just shoot them!
They used the rope nad climbed up and didd all what they had to.The problem was how to open the vault.They guard were shot dead by SD pistol,also by Takahashi.
Xiao planted a C4 bomb on the vualt door.Vault door blew and they started robbing.While Barry,Nick and Taka were robbing Xiao went to toilete,and he called the police.
Xiao:Goodbye my freinds,and good luck!!! Hahahahha!!
Barry picked up the cellphone.
Barry(cellphone):Anthony,HELP!Xiao betraid us.He called the cops,I think.
Anthonyi(cellphone):Ok,I am coming.I can only land on the roof.
Barry(cellphone):Ok,thanks come fast!!
They hang up.They grabbed all the money and went on the roof where they saw cops surrounded them.
Nick:Fuck,cops.Hide.
Takahashi:Shit,I think a saw a MINIGUN!
Barry:Chill man.
Anthony came with the helicopter,when he saw the hurt.
Anthony:Come fast,all in!!!
Cops:THIS IS SFPD,YOU'RE SURROUNDED!! PUT YOUR HANDS UP!!!!!
Barry:All in!!
They went in and escaped somehow.In helicopter:
Barry:We must find and kill that dude Xiao.
Nick:We atleast have the cash.
Takahashi:He isn't that smart…Hehehe
RESTAURANT IN CHINTOWN


A few months ago they came into the Chintown restaurnt.Nick placed the C4 and blew everything up.
Barry:Hahahhahahahah
They went into a helicopter and flew to the roof to snipe.Xiao came to his restaurant.
Xiao:WHAT THE HELL HAPPEND HERE?
Barry,Nick,Takahashi and Kashi(sniping):GOODBYE MY LOVER!!SAY 'HI' TO CHAIN GANG!!!HAHAHAHAH
So that's how it ended.They flew back to LS to their home.But cops were still after them.

Desired HQ:

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Name/ Forum Name/Rank

James_Barry/James_eon_Barry/7
Takahashi_JC_Yung/Leon Isek/6
Anthony_Webo/WeboBomb/6
John_Blood/John Blood/5
Nick_Cannon/??/5
Justen_Dalas/??/4
Takashi_Raiazuke/??/3
Johnny_Biker/??/2
Nathan_Smith/??/1

Names of Ranks:

Oyabun: rank 7
So-Oyabun: rank 6
Gashira: rank 5
Wakagashira: rank 4
Komon: rank 3
Saiko Komon: rank 2
Shatei: rank 1
Shateigashira: rank 0



Desired Skins:
Skins:
Leader skin: http://wiki.samp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_228.png
Rank 6 skin: http://wiki.samp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_121.png
Rank 0,1,2,3,4,5:
http://wiki.samp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_121.png
Or this: http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_122.png


Female skin:
http://wiki.samp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_263.png
And this : http://wiki.sa-mp.com/wiki/Image:Skin_224.png

FAMILY COLOR: ID 115

Why:
Well before this I had an expirience with being a 'boss'.And I wanted to create my own gang because I think that SZR needs more families.So here's one.


There's some pictures from Air Port race:

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There's some pictures from our party at Alhambra:


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There's some pictures from Party at TGB:

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There's some pictures from FreeRunning event:

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can you include an ooc section on why you should get a gang because it is really all we read

also can you make it longer because it is really all we read

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In 1760s a guy called James Barry was a nerd

There's something odd about this. ))

Davy_Mousse wrote:((

In 1760s a guy called James Barry was a nerd

There's something odd about this. ))

hahahahaha XP

Members are active story's good... You got my Support Chinese fellas ;)
Good Luck

Support.I like the story.The members are active.

The Triads... hmmm sounds familiar

Creative story apparently...you have my support at the moment

you are a good dude james barry, but some of your members suck, john blood completely harrased me, and killed me, keep an eye on him, or tragedies will begin
anyways I like you and your app, goodluck fella

Koko Comb wrote:you are a good dude james barry, but some of your members suck, john blood completely harrased me, and killed me, keep an eye on him, or tragedies will begin
anyways I like you and your app, goodluck fella

His members sucks? John used to be in your family and he is a dm'er ?

well tom, this is what happened, [FAMILY CHAT]

OutsiderJohn Blood: hey koko can you give me rank 5 or r6? ill take points and im active, please!
Boss Konami Comb: we have enough LTs for now, Ill inform you, when we need.
Outsider John blood: give me r5 or r6 or I leave your family!!!
Boss Konami Comb: okay, goodbye
Outsider John Blood: you are stupid

GANG CHAT -

John: you suck konami, fuck you asshole
Konami: okay, leave this gangchat
John: you leave motherfucker
John: fuck your mom
Konami: you're dead
John: no please, lets meet at bank
Konami: okay, im there
John: im coming

Me in my huntley, he got out, shot me and got back in his car, then i followed him, he started shitting me, and i killed him

I guess that is an enough proof that he is completely an idiot.

Hope you liked the story,and thanks for the supports.

Why you lying you've invented a story and now we are trying to family fails,please let me alone.....And why you not put that part of killing me and you're looking for $ 100k .... Stop lyling.

John_Blood wrote:Why you lying you've invented a story and now we are trying to family fails,please let me alone.....And why you not put that part of killing me and you're looking for $ 100k .... Stop lyling.

wat

Koko Comb wrote:well tom, this is what happened, [FAMILY CHAT]

OutsiderJohn Blood: hey koko can you give me rank 5 or r6? ill take points and im active, please!
Boss Konami Comb: we have enough LTs for now, Ill inform you, when we need.
Outsider John blood: give me r5 or r6 or I leave your family!!!
Boss Konami Comb: okay, goodbye
Outsider John Blood: you are stupid

GANG CHAT -

John: you suck konami, fuck you asshole
Konami: okay, leave this gangchat
John: you leave motherfucker
John: fuck your mom
Konami: you're dead
John: no please, lets meet at bank
Konami: okay, im there
John: im coming

Me in my huntley, he got out, shot me and got back in his car, then i followed him, he started shitting me, and i killed him

I guess that is an enough proof that he is completely an idiot.

Barry, Koko is right in this...

I know I shouldnt be posting here Im just here to give some comments on your app and hoping that you can change it for the better.

1. The story needs a lot of improvement like for example at the Casino you mentioned "Sayonara" which is Japanese not Chinese and if I'm not mistaken Triads are the Chinese Mafia.

2. The names of the Ranks. Try searching the net for appropriate rank names because those rank names are "Yakuza" rank names which as I mention earlier not Chinese.

3. I know its a bit confusing but your mixing up both Chinese and Japanese gangs.

4. Get a RP theme example the Yakuza have a teahouse since the Japs loves teahouses you guys should get a cover or business which the Chinese often get into for example Restaurants or a Chinese Medicine Store or something.

5. And you guys should think of new Events or better yet Roleplay events showing the true colors of a Triad not the mediocre events that most gangs have like races, boxing or plane surfing etc etc.

6. And for my last comment since your a Triad a criminal organization you dont reveal or tell anyone that your a triad they have secrecy in their organization.

Well I hope this helps and I hope that the other people that is interested in creating a gang would read this. Thank you.

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