Jason_Rook, SAPD Application.

[jason_rook]

IC:
Character name: Jason_Rook
Date of birth: 17/08/19895
Phone number: 93011
Address/general location (optional): I normally stay over at my friends flat, so i don't have a location atm.


OOC:
Names of any alts you have/had on SZR: None.
Previous roleplay experience, including other servers (optional): I Played Goodfellas old amazing roleplay, and a few others including this one
Will your news character be your primary character? (optional): Yes it will, its the only character i play on this server and i can play quite alot per day.

IC:
A brief description of what brought you here. The reason i came here was because i was inspired by the radio channel when i heard it as i was driving.

A brief description of why you feel you'd be an asset to our team (feel free to include relevant skills and/or achievements): Well, i had always wanted to be a News reporter of some sort as when i was younger i always was the kind of kid that spoke out in front of people and was never shy and i always new what was going on in the world at the time as i was a watcher of the news.

An example of your writing in the two formats ((Article format, no less than 50 words, and in-game /news format, no less than 7 lines. See below for examples. Update: Wackiness (being outrageous) won't get you hired, and please try not to report on the common subjects - Nurgle, UFOs, combat situations, action stories, etc. Made up interviews will NOT be accepted.)):
In current news 2 american soldiers have been killed in Iraq, it seems they were patroling as a road side bomb triggered as they were walking.The bodies were found 10 metres from the acctual accident which explains this was a very powerful road side bomb, the parents of these 2 soldiers were informed, they were devistated but one of the soldiers parents was sad yet glad he died fighting for his country. In other news a savage dog was let out and mauled a 3 year old child to death. Further investigation is yet to be carried out on how the dog was brought up and how it gets treat. Thats all for tonight.

IC:
Yesterday near the SAPD it seemed to be raining Go-Karts, Outrages ? I Know, but what started this? No one knows, people are investigating how this happend and so far nothing has been discoverd, Many civilions think it was an experiment gone wrong at the local Garage, but others differ. All we know is that there was no way to avoid these Exploding Go-karts and it seems a few people were injured and some even killed from these Menacing Karts, Thats Jason_Rook with SANews, Good evening San Andreas.


Any additional comments (optional): If i'm in the SA news team what does it include other than talking on the radio, Just wondering if it includes more.

[Fang_Wang]

A brief description of why you feel you'd be an asset to our team (feel free to include relevant skills and/or achievements): Well, i had always wanted to be a News reporter of some sort as when i was younger i always was the kind of kid that spoke out in front of people and was never shy and i always new what was going on in the world at the time as i was a watcher of the news.

I know that I am not a Senior Editor but forgive me cause I just wanted to make a quick comment. Your run on sentence has more words then the minimum for an article

[Tommy_Gavin]

SAPD application? In addition to the run on sentence, you did not follow the instructions on the 2 news formats, your article is chock full of punctuation, capitalization, and spelling errors.

[Davy]

You applied for two public services, maybe more. Choose between one or the other.

[Ykraiina]

Hey... umm... SAPD is next door. Better luck next time bub.