Dominick_Star , SANews Application

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Dylan12369
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Joined: January 28th, 2009, 10:04 pm
Game Name(s): Dominick_Star
Location: Canada EH?

Dominick_Star , SANews Application

Post by Dylan12369 »

IC:
Character name:Dominick Star
Date of birth:January 1st,1960
Phone number:66278
Address/general location (optional): 2810 Lockington Drive


OOC:
Names of any alts you have/had on SZR: Chris_Rain, Those are the only ones that i've used.
Previous roleplay experience, including other servers (optional): I've been roleplaying for quite a long time, about 2 years? Not always on Sa:Mp, i roleplayed on Garry'sMod, and I started playing Sa:Mp around Christmas time.
Will your news character be your primary character? (optional): Yes, he will be.

IC:
A brief description of what brought you here. (Was it a recommendation? A wanted ad? Simple whimsy? Something else?):After one of my best-buddies, Josh_Lafontaine, joined the SANews team, I realized how fun it could be and I liked the idea of informing our city of any recent events.

A brief description of why you feel you'd be an asset to our team (feel free to include relevant skills and/or achievements): I am a pretty funny guy and very creative, so I would like to become part of SANews to add some fun, and creative twists to the game.

An example of your writing in the two formats ((Article format, no less than 50 words, and in-game /news format, no less than 7 lines. See below for examples. Update: Wackiness (being outrageous) won't get you hired, and please try not to report on the common subjects - Nurgle, UFOs, combat situations, action stories, etc. Made up interviews will NOT be accepted.)):

Last night, A Government experiment escaped from a CIA guarded base in the Las Venturas desert. Government officials have been trying their best to cover up this thing's escape, but reports from nearby residents have gone something like this : "I were outside milkin' the cows, and I done seen this big green feller run out of that there compound thinger! That there feller ran off to that there road where I take Ol' Betsy there, As he pointed towards a beaten up old pick-up truck, out to town to get me some more bair(Beer I suppose.). Some fancy lookin' fellers tried talkin' me into thinkin' that was no green feller, but a reflectshun or somethin' I don't believe that one bit!" That was from a local resident, Billy Joe. The next time we get ANY news of this 'Extra-Terrestrial' We will broadcast it as soon as possible. We urge civilians to stay indoors and if you see anything, call 911 IMMEDIATELY. That's it for us here at SANews, Don't kill anymore people Los Santos!

/news Hello Los Santos, This just in the new store of Yoshimart had an amazing start-up
/news They massed over 500 customers in a few short days!
/news But the LSPD has had some reports of illegal activity happening at Yoshimart,
/news They haven't got any hard evidence yet, so Yoshimart is still open for business.
/news Some people believe Yoshimart is a haven for Drug Dealers and Arms Dealers,
/news But I think it's just another innocent 24/7 , If you have anything else to report,
/news Call us! (( /call news )) We'll report it. Thank you, and good night Los Santos.


Any additional comments (optional): I know my sign-off kinda sucked, but it was the best I could think of beside "Peace love and chicken grease!" . Also, I have always found myself to be a grammar snob, so I have fairly good english skills. Anyways, I hope you liked my application!
Last edited by Dylan12369 on April 24th, 2009, 1:56 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Dominick_Star , SANews Application

Post by Tommy_Gavin »


An example of your writing in the two formats ((Article format, no less than 50 words, and in-game /news format, no less than 7 lines.
You have neglected to provide an example of the in-game /news format.
[quote][16:52] <Racha3l> [23:46:45] [command] [Billy_Kid]: /t 21 just get on the point i got u nigga
Dylan12369
Posts: 67.0
Joined: January 28th, 2009, 10:04 pm
Game Name(s): Dominick_Star
Location: Canada EH?

Re: Dominick_Star , SANews Application

Post by Dylan12369 »

Oh, crap. I thought it was article OR in-game news. I'll fix that.
Dom_Star - Forelli Family, Arms Dealer
Dylan12369
Posts: 67.0
Joined: January 28th, 2009, 10:04 pm
Game Name(s): Dominick_Star
Location: Canada EH?

Re: Dominick_Star , SANews Application

Post by Dylan12369 »

There we go.
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