SZR GTA

Hey, just posting this to see if I can find a remedy to my problem. I have been off SZR for a week or so and when I attempted on connecting today I wasnt able to connect, it just kept retrying to connect but after 10 minutes still no luck. I tried connecting to other servers to see if it was a unifo...

Chris Hansen wrote:Sorry no Asians

Agreed.

Tony_Violi wrote:I can't come up with stories. x)

eeeekk

You have some grammar and spelling mistakes in your application. Your use of photos and your long story shows me you put some effort into the application. The IC (in character) part of your application is written completely out of character. Willing to excuse this as its not completely clear. I enjo...

Your newsroom format is missing completely and your application suffers from grammar and spelling mistakes. Put a little more effort into it, and show me an IC newsroom example.

I find your writing amusing and creative although grammar and spelling mistakes litter your application. You have a good sense of humor and I have a feeling you would be a good asset to our team. /news format and newsroom format are correct and it seems like you got the hang of it. I'd say give you ...

I found some grammatical errors and spelling mistakes in your application but other than that you seem like you can get creative in your writing. I'd like to see you explore something other than your own gang in your news report but it looks as if you have the ability to build on it. Your news forma...

Redo both news format examples, looks like you rushed this, take your time and show us some better examples you seem to have the sense of humor to pull it off

ian how dare you criticize me

Here a few helpful tips, incase you wish to re-apply: • Capitalize ONLY the words that need to be capitalized. • Here at SANews, we LOVE commata, fullstops and exclamation marks. So do your best by including them into your application! • *sigh*, I have to write this to 80% of the applicants. I know...

they may have

I am thinking about how to make chocolate cake containing weed that makes me think chocolate is vanilla, and that gives me the ability to fly.

fail

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Haha dont get me wrong man, that would be funny, im just judging compared to other apps, its not my call anyhow, just putting in my two cents. I'm not trying to be a serious asshole, truly i'm not. Look at the ruthlessness we unleash on other applicants with poor grammar and incomplete apps. If you ...

luca I want joeee in for the comedy....he will make a great addition I don't understand the comedic character you're talking about. Is there something about this guy that you know from in game experience that will change my mind? His application isn't completed and is rampant with grammatical error...

I cannot believe people are considering this app. I hope this is a simple spur of the moment screw around thing. Oh and joe crow, there is still the problem about you being 12, i dont think 12 year olds are qualified to drive news vans. But come by the HQ sometime, ill give you a nice sticker and s...

Yeah no offense Joe, but fuck off. Don't post in any applications but you're own.

I cannot believe people are considering this app. I hope this is a simple spur of the moment screw around thing. Oh and joe crow, there is still the problem about you being 12, i dont think 12 year olds are qualified to drive news vans. But come by the HQ sometime, ill give you a nice sticker and so...

hah yeah i think so, i havent seen you guys on when im on. Ive just been chillen around the hq.

sorry, but no. Reapply with a completely different app.

Um so first of all, in your application you're 12, (remember assume the date is 1992) Next your application isn't complete, you haven't provided an article format which should be around 50 words. Look at other accepted applications for examples. Your in game news report is pretty bad, remember you h...

*sniff* I smell grapefruit

Yeah.. I quit faction on accident.
That means ari or pimplemoose i need to be reinvited when you guys are on next.

Thanks news folk

Hey... umm... SAPD is next door. Better luck next time bub.